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Daily Writing Journal - my urban lit African American romance. - #15 Progress with grammar, trying out sample movement. New Synopsis

So I'm going back to craft practice and only spending 15 minutes a day on the blog. I might do less. Right now I've clocked in about 1.45 minutes. So let's roll.

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Yes, this is one of my craft weaknesses and has given me grief while editing. That and a host of others However I've done a sample.

Practice one.


Danny slapped the creaky front door shut and crossed the busy road. It was freezing donkey balls. Ancient Mr Pink was outside with his old banger car, polishing the yellow bodywork, rubbing in the shine so it shone like fool's gold. Two doors down, troublemaking Mrs Green was fighting with her no-good baby father, cursing him out, calling him a useless mama's boy, no change there.

At the bottom of the road, Danny turned a sharp left and hurried down a row of expensive townhouses. All neatly kept with immaculate front porches and luxury cars parked outs - Jaguars, Bentleys, Maybach and the odd Porsche. All except one townhouse. It was tumbled down and derelict with a rusty bike changed to the railing. Loud music boomed from the inside. Danny stopped and stared at the shabby house, thinking up the courage to go in.

Takeaway - I need to look at locations.

Synopsis

It's been five years since ANGELICA WASHINGTON was in a relationship, and she has on plans for one. One failed relationship was traumatic enough. But now the handsome LEYTON THOMAS wants to get to know her. Will she let him in?

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Okay, not as good as before but thats because I'm 13 minutes and  I need to round up. Writing? Yes, going well but need a little more to go on. But I'm WRITING...YAY! Even if it's just practice.
Okay I'm on 14 minutes now and I have to publish.



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